[Informatics] Hypothesis

[Sylvia Pastore]

Hi all
Can I ask for feedback of this hypothesis that a student has written. I’ve asked him to fix it up but then I think I’m harsh. Thanks 

'Those at the age of 18 or under are more likely to result in car crashes, because they don't have much driving experience driving and the decisions they make are still jejune.'

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