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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thanks for your response Melissa – I agree with your points about that last question and noted it at the time when I was reviewing the paper. I think I was so caught in writing my response about the design brief
that i had forgotten about that question. They are all excellent and valid points you make. Hope you also give that feed on line as well.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";mso-fareast-language:EN-AU">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";mso-fareast-language:EN-AU"> destech-bounces@edulists.com.au
[mailto:destech-bounces@edulists.com.au] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Melissa Treverton<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, 24 November 2011 7:39 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> 'Design and Technology Teachers' Mailing List'<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Design and Technology] thanks for link and exam feedback<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Hi Gabriella and others,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I agree with your comments Gabriella. Overall it was a fair exam. All of my students said they ended up using stretch fabric in the design as it made sense. I also had a problem with the final question with
the Product Development Cycle, there were only 4 stages + research. I have always taught 5 + research ( concept, design, development & prototype, production & distribution, retail & consumer use, evaluation & modification) Where the question ask students
to name the missing 2 there were 2 possible options for stage 3. (production & distribution OR Retail & consumer use) I hope both answers will be marked as correct. There was a lso a very wordy question asking students to about evaluation criteria ( don’t
have the exam on me). I thought this could have been written in a much clearer manner.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I was also surprised the “design a poster’ question was included again after the feedback last year that it was more of a Vis Com question.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">About to start all over again on Monday, feels like a very short turn around.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Melissa Treverton<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";mso-fareast-language:EN-AU">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";mso-fareast-language:EN-AU"> destech-bounces@edulists.com.au
[mailto:destech-bounces@edulists.com.au] <b>On Behalf Of </b>VERSTRAETEN Gabriella<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, 24 November 2011 5:21 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> tran.lorraine.i@edumail.vic.gov.au; Design and Technology Teachers' Mailing List (destech@edulists.com.au)<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Design and Technology] thanks for link and exam feedback<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Lorraine<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you publishing the link regarding feedback for the exam survey. I had a chance on the weekend to look more closely at the exam and had a couple of comments I was keen to feedback. It was very timely as I had just finished typing
up my response when your email came through. I have pasted my comments below and would be interested to hear from any other teachers especially textiles in they felt the same as me.
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<p class="MsoNormal">What I feedback: <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Overall, I felt it was a good exam that covered a lot of areas. However, I do have a minor and major concern. My minor concern is Section B, Question q. Even I struggle to understand how to answer the question. I understand the difference
between ‘effective’ and ‘efficient,’ it’s subtle (which a number of students wouldn’t get. I would have to ask here, is this an English comprehension exam or a design and product based exam?) Where in the study design is the comparison between these articulated,
especially in reference to the planning and production activities.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">My major concern has to do with the Constraints given in the Design Brief to the Costume option which gave Textiles students a distinct disadvantage that none of the other mediums were constrained by. This is very unfair to the textiles
students. It all comes down to one sentence, “Note: Jude dislikes stretch materials.” The brief also states, “The costume needs to allow for ease of movement” due to “some jumping and gymnastics” routines. That constraint screams stretch fabrics. You tell
me what gymnastic outfit isn’t made of a stretch fabric – it has to allow for stretch, comfort and ease of movement, which is the exact nature of a stretch/knitted material. That is their core characteristic, ease of movement. Any tracksuit, swimwear, tights,
underpants, t-shirts etc. are all made of stretch fabrics. Just by the way, I’d like to know how Jude, male or female, is going to stop his or her jiggly bits from jumping around uncomfortably throughout the routine without the support of stretch fabrics in
their underwear! So this is very unfair to rule these fabrics out. While the brief doesn’t say that you can’t use stretch fabrics, it says “Notes: Jude dislikes stretch materials.” If the note said “Jude dislikes red materials and materials with a textured
surface” as a designer you wouldn’t design Jude a red outfit nor an outfit of textured fabric. In response as a designer you aren’t going to use stretch fabrics. So the textiles students needed to design an outfit allowed for gymnastics in its construction,
i.e. gussets or loose fit. So there was a degree of difficulty there for textiles students. Now, I wouldn’t have minded this if the same constraints were then placed on all the other materials. For example, “the body adornment that Jake didn’t like plastics
and resins.” This would be fair. But they weren’t, not one of the other 5 materials listed were presented with such a constraint. Clearly that comment was added in by someone who didn’t appreciate the significance of the statement or someone who deliberately
wanted to undermine the scores of textiles students. It is disappointing and unfair. So, that was my major concern.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Cheers <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Regards <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Gabriella <o:p></o:p></p>
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